This is pretty kawaii. The
shading is really nice.
The wrinkles on the girl's Christmas outfit are perfect.
I love the expression on her face and the cute bell on her tail.
One question: Where's her feet? *I think feet are one of the most difficult
things to draw*
Its really a nice submission for Christmas. I wish I could've seen it then, it'd
have made me more in a festive mood.
Thanks again for sharing your work. ^^
The shading is realy good. ^^ The lighting/shine on her hair is good too.
Her eyes don't quite go with her body, but you've really done a good job.
I hope you continue to draw and submit more to MT.
Thanks for sharing your submission with us.
Oh my! Its soooo adorible I can't describe the *awwww* face I made when I saw
this! ...bribe you with a cupcake.
*wells up with tears from the cuteness*
The rain falling down, the water in the stone street, shading, textures of
clothing, the lighting... even the light mist/splash slightly hovering right
above the ground (that in itself says so much for this work); all of it has been
taken into account and has had so much effort put into each effect. Its all so
very much to take in. O_O Its simply amazing and so very adorible! Wonderful
job! Thank you so much for submitting this to MiniTokyo. ^^
Simply amazing work. Its like "The Birth of Venus" meets an India-type
goddess of art theme... coming out of the lotus. WOW.
Its really great and so beautiful. I love it.
+fav and thank you so much for sharing, I look forward to your next wonderful
work of art. ^^
Your artistic ability is amazing. I hope you get a lot more recognition for your
wonderful works and your talent for such amazing details. You deserve it. ^^
Keep up the great work and thank you for submitting it to MiniTokyo where we all
can enjoy it.
Also in the original anime, (to clear up any confusion) Doris had 2 red braids
and Larmica had black hair. The characters in the new manga are almost exactly
the same as what was in the original first novel. The anime changed them,
therefore; you might not recognize them.
Doris - regular farmgirl
Larmica - Daughter of Count Lee, is a vampire countess
This is going to sound odd, but I like the background (the leaves especially)
the most.
I hope you're not offended.
The backdrop is great and the girl is adorible.
Nice job, and thank you for posting it. ^^
...sometime I'll have to ask how you did the
leaves and their glowing look... its so awesome...
Wow. Its super-active with the colors, but its really great. ^^
How you got everything to piece together so well... O_O ...and blend... its
great.
Thanks for sharing.
I'd thought that I had seen this one somewhere before or something like it.
I've don't believe that I've seen anyone vector a clean scan, mostly I see them
cleaning it up.
^^ Its much larger than the original, everything seems very crisp and neat. ...I'm looking forward to your
spoiler...
Nice vibrant colors, great backdrop, wonderful characters. Nice job.
You might've wanted to smooth out the character outlines some, since there are a
few rough edges. However, its still a great wallpaper.
Thanks for submitting it and hope you continue to make more.
merged: 02-09-2008 ~ 04:01am
BTW: Could I have your permission to make a skin from this wallpaper?
Really great. The shading is wonderful, especially the eye. For some reason, it
really does look 3D. ^^ The characters of the primary and secondary feathers are
correct and done really well. Most people just sketching animals don't take that
into detail, but you did.
Adorible! Its such a comfortable painting in the sense of it gives a relaxing
feel... like a summer evening. Really nice job.
Thanks so much for sharing it. ^^
I think you did well on Hakkai.
I wonder if his jaw is too strong? To me, Hakkai was such a gentle character
that I almost want to say is strong, yet fragile.
I think that in itself is very difficult to capture.
Its really wonderful to have a Hakkai now to your collection. Keep
up the great work, please!
*claps* YAY! ^^ Thank you for making him!
I know what you mean with him being more effeminate than the others.
Thanks for drawing him for my request! I'm
so happy, it didn't take you very long either. Wow. He looks great! THANK
YOU!
This is pretty kawaii.
The
shading is really nice. 
The wrinkles on the girl's Christmas outfit are perfect.
I love the expression on her face and the cute bell on her tail.
One question: Where's her feet? *I think feet are one of the most difficult things to draw*
Its really a nice submission for Christmas. I wish I could've seen it then, it'd have made me more in a festive mood.
Thanks again for sharing your work. ^^
The shading is realy good. ^^ The lighting/shine on her hair is good too.
Her eyes don't quite go with her body, but you've really done a good job.
I hope you continue to draw and submit more to MT.
Thanks for sharing your submission with us.
Oh my! Its soooo adorible I can't describe the *awwww* face I made when I saw this! ...bribe you with a cupcake.
*wells up with tears from the cuteness*
The rain falling down, the water in the stone street, shading, textures of clothing, the lighting... even the light mist/splash slightly hovering right above the ground (that in itself says so much for this work); all of it has been taken into account and has had so much effort put into each effect. Its all so very much to take in. O_O Its simply amazing and so very adorible! Wonderful job! Thank you so much for submitting this to MiniTokyo. ^^
I did a complete double-take on this. O_O Amazing and professional work.
You should be winning awards for your talent!
+fav and *dropped jaw* ^^
Simply amazing work. Its like "The Birth of Venus" meets an India-type goddess of art theme... coming out of the lotus. WOW.
Its really great and so beautiful. I love it.
+fav and thank you so much for sharing, I look forward to your next wonderful work of art. ^^
Every tiny mark in this doujin has a purpose. The lighting, shading, and effort on all the small details are really outstanding. Awesome work. ^^
Your artistic ability is amazing. I hope you get a lot more recognition for your wonderful works and your talent for such amazing details. You deserve it. ^^ Keep up the great work and thank you for submitting it to MiniTokyo where we all can enjoy it.
Pretty neat doujin. The strokes are strong, but I don't mind. ^^
Thanks for sharing.
Spiffy. I hope the game'll be awesome. ^^
Also in the original anime, (to clear up any confusion) Doris had 2 red braids and Larmica had black hair. The characters in the new manga are almost exactly the same as what was in the original first novel. The anime changed them, therefore; you might not recognize them.
Doris - regular farmgirl
Larmica - Daughter of Count Lee, is a vampire countess
Kawaii! ^^
Great job! Thanks for sharing.
+fav
This is going to sound odd, but I like the background (the leaves especially) the most.
I hope you're not offended.
The backdrop is great and the girl is adorible.
Nice job, and thank you for posting it. ^^
...sometime I'll have to ask how you did the leaves and their glowing look... its so awesome...
Wow. Its super-active with the colors, but its really great. ^^
How you got everything to piece together so well... O_O ...and blend... its great.
Thanks for sharing.
The illustrations throughout the manga are done by Saiko Takaki.
If anyone is interested, the original one is here: http://gallery.aethereality.net/download.php?id=2176
I'd thought that I had seen this one somewhere before or something like it.
I've don't believe that I've seen anyone vector a clean scan, mostly I see them cleaning it up.
^^ Its much larger than the original, everything seems very crisp and neat.
...I'm looking forward to your spoiler...
Thanks again for sharing.
Nice vibrant colors, great backdrop, wonderful characters. Nice job.
You might've wanted to smooth out the character outlines some, since there are a few rough edges. However, its still a great wallpaper.
Thanks for submitting it and hope you continue to make more.
merged: 02-09-2008 ~ 04:01am
BTW: Could I have your permission to make a skin from this wallpaper?
Wonderful! I've never seen this one before, its terrific. Make more!
Thanks for sharing it.
I love Legato! ^^
Thanks for sharing it!
Such a sad piece, but really nice. Thank you for sharing it. ^^
Really great. The shading is wonderful, especially the eye. For some reason, it really does look 3D. ^^ The characters of the primary and secondary feathers are correct and done really well. Most people just sketching animals don't take that into detail, but you did.
Thanks for submitting it.
Adorible! Its such a comfortable painting in the sense of it gives a relaxing feel... like a summer evening. Really nice job.
Thanks so much for sharing it. ^^
I think you did well on Hakkai.
Keep
up the great work, please! 
I wonder if his jaw is too strong? To me, Hakkai was such a gentle character that I almost want to say is strong, yet fragile.
I think that in itself is very difficult to capture.
Its really wonderful to have a Hakkai now to your collection.
His smirk is great. ^^ I think if you colorize this doujin somehow, it might capture him even more. That would be my only critique.
*claps* YAY! ^^ Thank you for making him!
I'm
so happy, it didn't take you very long either. Wow. He looks great! 
THANK
YOU!
I know what you mean with him being more effeminate than the others.
Thanks for drawing him for my request!